just Leo dying is a sad thing---but it hurts so good XD
the part that really got me was where it compared Mikey's and Leo's worths to each other because...it's true. it hurts to think about it, but it's so true. Mikey's death would be such a larger blow to the family....
the chopped sentences really added to the effect of Leo only being able to focus on few things at a time and the pain <3 plus, it worked with telling what was going both inside and outside of Leo's head.
and it ending with Leo wishing for a heaven with his brothers...is so Leonardo.
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on 2007-09-12 05:25 am (UTC)just Leo dying is a sad thing---but it hurts so good XD
the part that really got me was where it compared Mikey's and Leo's worths to each other because...it's true. it hurts to think about it, but it's so true. Mikey's death would be such a larger blow to the family....
the chopped sentences really added to the effect of Leo only being able to focus on few things at a time and the pain <3
plus, it worked with telling what was going both inside and outside of Leo's head.
and it ending with Leo wishing for a heaven with his brothers...is so Leonardo.
;_; what a cool fic.