I have always hoped to read something similar to this: my idea was for Sanji and Zoro (because I'm obsessed with "One Piece" and because I love their original seiyuu just as much as the ones they have in my country... the whole dubbing world is kind of interesting and misterious to me, but I've been wondering what kind of yaoi/shonen-ai anime would come out if the main characters had Nakai and Hirata as their voices), so I waited, and waited, and waited... I have even thought about writing something myself, but then I realized that... I CAN'T WRITE, DAMMIT!
And now you come with this, and you don't know how happy and impatient I am to see where this is going! I'm a big fan of yours, and even if Renji isn't the guy I had thought for, he's one hell of a character! I just loved this chapter (the scene with the girls in particular, I can't stop thinking that it would indeed happen), and if you write the rest of this fic like you wrote this, I'm sure it'll be great!!!! ^__^