Great start to what promises to be a great story!!

Seriously, a grown man (a gorgeous grown man) in the BL section of a manga store? I would have giggled too. XD
And when he went to chat with the critters fangirls to ask about that story... oh, boy. Couldn't stop smirking. He didn't know what he was getting into... though he did know how to milk the situation for all it was worth. Sneaky Renji, using his pretty hair as a weapon. XD

But seriously, when I read the title of that manga I had to stop and think for a moment whether it wasn't an existing story and if I hadn't read it... even after the summary I wasn't sure. Seems to me that this manga was not going to be revolutionizing the history of BL mangas everywhere. XD

(And talking about BL mangas, check this post for a list of recs for cliché-defying, really good boy on boy smexing stories... and there are more recs in the comments. But be warned: once you get in, it's hard to look back... this list leeched three full days of my life. :P
http://maldoror-gw.livejournal.com/80517.html )

Loved it that the eleventh section made its appearence in the form of the eleventh floor of his apartment building; I love those guys.

So Renji got stuck with Kon...? Figured that Ichigo and Rukia would get rid of him first chance they got. XD

(but poor Renji, being left behind, too... *huggles*)

Can't wait for Zoro to show up!
...and for him to eventually meet Kenpachi. They'd be instant BFF. XD