Ok, just so you feel better (and heal faster), a little taste of what is coming:
"Zoro coughed up a bit of blood and blinked several times to try to clear his vision. Shit, but that had hurt. Not nearly as much as having his chest split open or receiving all the pain and exhaustion of one of Luffy’s fights all at once, but still. Hurt. Pain. Ouch. All that stuff."
See what I mean by how uncooperative Zoro is with me? :P I wonder how people manage to write angst from his perspective... *sighs*
As for your own "assignment", take your time. You may not be the fastest writer, but the result is always worth the wait. :3
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"Zoro coughed up a bit of blood and blinked several times to try to clear his vision. Shit, but that had hurt. Not nearly as much as having his chest split open or receiving all the pain and exhaustion of one of Luffy’s fights all at once, but still. Hurt. Pain. Ouch. All that stuff."
See what I mean by how uncooperative Zoro is with me? :P
I wonder how people manage to write angst from his perspective... *sighs*
As for your own "assignment", take your time. You may not be the fastest writer, but the result is always worth the wait. :3