[fic] One Piece - The Deal Part 3 - (Sanji/Zoro)

[bunnymaccool]

Title: The Deal – Part 3
Pairing: Sanji/Zoro
Rating: NC-17!! My very first! Holy carp!! .
Spoilers: Nope – pre-Franky & Brook
A/N: Totally nervous about posting this… heh heh… hope it’s not too awful. XD
Summary: Zoro has to finally own up to his part of the deal.

Many, MANY THANKS to Miss Bronzie bronzetigress and Miss Kay kay_cricketed for helping me work through this sucker, and to the couple of you darling people that kept asking for it... I hope it doesn't disappoint!! <3 <3!!

Also, if you have not already seen it, the FABULOUS Miss sickle_weasel did a fanart for Part 2 ... TIS BEAUTIFUL!!TIS GORGEOUS!! *__* TIS HERE!!! <3 <3 <3 <3!!!

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The Deal - Part 1
The Deal - Part 2
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The Deal - Part 3

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*whew* ... and this isn't the end. There will still be more. ^___^

Comments

[pi90katana.livejournal.com]

BUNNY-FIC!

Ah, what a wonderful, wonderful thing to come home to after a long day at work.

I must admit that I'm not a particular fan of yaoi (besides my love of genfic, this might be because half the time I see it, it's by authors who totally throw out parts of the character to make room for the smex and it just doesn't come out nicely ;_;). There's only a few authors who write it that I will regularly read, and you happen to be one of them.

That said... Good lord. This was hot as hell. *_*

Another thing I love is how believable you make the characters. You keep their personalities intact AND manage to make the smex read twice as good!

I loved this part:

The straining fabric caused Zoro’s legs to leave the cook’s sides and come together above his head. As the cook slowly worked the cloth up towards his knees, he realized that his ass and manly bits were completely exposed before the other man. His pride SCREAMED at him for surrendering himself like this, and worse, to a man he didn’t even particularly like! It roared and raged at his suddenly submissive actions.

His libido’s reaction, however, was more along the lines of OH! GOODY! OH! GOODY! OH! GOODY!! Currently… his libido was winning the war in his head.

Bwahaha! I dies. XD

The end of the chapter was also really sweet, too. Aww... :3

(is SO happy right now)

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

Uwah!!! I am sooooooo happy you liked!! Especially since you're not a big yaoi fan! :D :D :D

*IS EXTREMELY PLEASED*

<3 <3 <3!!!

[wlk68.livejournal.com]

I must confess that I tend to prefer Sanji on the bottom but dayum, this was hot! I feel like I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke. Keep up the excellent work and keep those chapters coming!

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much!! <3 <3 <3!!!

Why Didn't you finish?!

[arinmon]

Omg! This was so great!!!!!! <3 <3 <3
why didn't you finish this wonderful piece of art?!

Re: Why Didn't you finish?!

[bunnymaccool]

Aw... sorry. :( Admittedly I sort of faded out of the One Piece fandom. Although I still love the characters. <3