Ah, what a wonderful, wonderful thing to come home to after a long day at work.
I must admit that I'm not a particular fan of yaoi (besides my love of genfic, this might be because half the time I see it, it's by authors who totally throw out parts of the character to make room for the smex and it just doesn't come out nicely ;_;). There's only a few authors who write it that I will regularly read, and you happen to be one of them.
That said... Good lord. This was hot as hell. *_*
Another thing I love is how believable you make the characters. You keep their personalities intact AND manage to make the smex read twice as good!
I loved this part:
The straining fabric caused Zoro’s legs to leave the cook’s sides and come together above his head. As the cook slowly worked the cloth up towards his knees, he realized that his ass and manly bits were completely exposed before the other man. His pride SCREAMED at him for surrendering himself like this, and worse, to a man he didn’t even particularly like! It roared and raged at his suddenly submissive actions.
His libido’s reaction, however, was more along the lines of OH! GOODY! OH! GOODY! OH! GOODY!! Currently… his libido was winning the war in his head.
Bwahaha! I dies. XD
The end of the chapter was also really sweet, too. Aww... :3
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Ah, what a wonderful, wonderful thing to come home to after a long day at work.
I must admit that I'm not a particular fan of yaoi (besides my love of genfic, this might be because half the time I see it, it's by authors who totally throw out parts of the character to make room for the smex and it just doesn't come out nicely ;_;). There's only a few authors who write it that I will regularly read, and you happen to be one of them.
That said... Good lord. This was hot as hell. *_*
Another thing I love is how believable you make the characters. You keep their personalities intact AND manage to make the smex read twice as good!
I loved this part:
The straining fabric caused Zoro’s legs to leave the cook’s sides and come together above his head. As the cook slowly worked the cloth up towards his knees, he realized that his ass and manly bits were completely exposed before the other man. His pride SCREAMED at him for surrendering himself like this, and worse, to a man he didn’t even particularly like! It roared and raged at his suddenly submissive actions.
His libido’s reaction, however, was more along the lines of OH! GOODY! OH! GOODY! OH! GOODY!! Currently… his libido was winning the war in his head.
Bwahaha! I dies. XD
The end of the chapter was also really sweet, too. Aww... :3
(is SO happy right now)